Thursday, July 03, 2008

I, Alone

Revision #1
(the flip-flop)

I, Alone

Now I lay me down to sleep
it's one o'clock - the hour of dread
I pray the Lord my soul to keep
when all the kids are tucked in bed
If I should die before I wake
with all their prayers devoutly said
I pray the Lord my soul to take
Though I, alone, fear God is dead.


I, Alone

It's one o'clock - the hour of dread -
and now I lay me down to sleep
when all the kids are tucked in bed
I pray the Lord my soul to keep
with all their prayers devoutly said
If I should die before I wake
and I, alone, fear God is dead.
I pray the Lord my soul to take.

2 comments:

Eric Valentine said...

Very nicely done, I like it. :)

Lo said...

Thank you, Eric.